Writing test 1 - Correction

             Nowadays music forms part of our lives. Music can be heard almost every minute while commuting, seeing commercials, walking in the mall, etc.

    The  reason for this is that scientist have realized music affects people and can change their mood.  Therefore, music has came up with the potential to become an effective alternative therapy that may be implemented in a few years.

      Most people warn that music does not protect the individual from the problems he has by  just hearing his  favorite song.Which means that if  music is used as a therapy it will only work as placebo that would not help the individual at all.

    However, It has been shown that music produces a neurological response on the individual which affects their behavior towards his daily routine and problems that come up during the day.

 To sum up, music can not protect people from their problems ,yet it works as a therapy and help people to improve their mood. With more research about this topic  we might even found out more uses for music or others types of stimulus and also work out how this types of  stimulus on the affects us in our lives.